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Post by Tehanu on Jun 11, 2011 14:11:30 GMT
Name - Kenzo Gender -Male Age - 18 Species - Natura Filli Element type - Water Clan- White Fox Family - Father - Aito - Lynx Clan - human (doesn't see him at all since outcast) Powers - can speak to water gain information from it Appearance - Black short styled hair, dark eyes Personalilty - calm but quick tempered soothing but quick in changing Weapons - a bow and arrow set Other equipment - nothing really Animal compainion -wit Japanese fox called Kazoku (family in Japanese) History - Brought up to always speak Japanese, because of his fathers secret (which he doesn't even know) so not many people understand him. His mother died in child birth and his father brought him up for 5 summers and 2 moons but then he became an outcast. He never liked his father since he beat him all the time so he became independent at a young age.
RP sample ---> Kenzo woke with a start. A dream. The same dream but what did it mean. he got up and looked upon his usual surroundings. White snow as always he wished he could escape it but where could he go he didn't speak much of what these people called clan "language". So he would do the usual walk the wilderness. But something was strange, something was eerie...
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Post by Espri on Jun 11, 2011 16:13:30 GMT
It's good, nice job. A few things, though. You didn't put anything down for clan. Yes, I saw that he was outcasted, but we need to know what clan he belonged to before. Also, we need to know why he was outcasted. And why was he brought up speaking Japanese? You can add to the history a lot. And as for the RP sample, it would be easier if you did a sample with this character. Add these and everything should be good! ;D
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Post by Nix on Jun 11, 2011 17:14:09 GMT
My only add is the appearance, long or short hair? Any scars or such like? Could you expand it a little more, like the history
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Post by Tehanu on Jun 12, 2011 9:15:56 GMT
sure can
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Post by Nix on Jun 12, 2011 10:14:30 GMT
That's better! I'll move and approve him now!
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