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Post by chidori on Jul 10, 2011 19:36:20 GMT
Here. I believe it was your turn to post so I'll put my last post below and we can just carry like you said. Jex lifted Jark off his back, relieving his aching back of the extra weight. Then he sat him on Niran, behind Nix, before leaping on after. That way, if Jark's father did see them, he wouldn't see his son at first glance. "Where to now?" he asked quietly.
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Post by Nix on Jul 10, 2011 19:46:43 GMT
Ok, we'll need to make a little edit seeing as nix's brother is a wolf not a horse. Also could you put the plot up
Nix looked over at jex and then nudged her pack further down the skin boat and then shifted to one side as jex put jark in the boat behind her and then nodded and turned round and moved her pack so jark's head was resting on it and then she pulled off her jerkin and dropped it over the sleeping boy and nodded before sitting up again and grabbing a paddle from down beside her and looked up at her freind and waved to ghost on the shore. The pale wolf gave a bark of anger and worry, "come on, we have to go now" nix told him in wolf and he shook his head and dropped his tail in fear
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Post by chidori on Jul 11, 2011 17:32:42 GMT
Sure, whatever it takes. Jex frowned. He thought wolves liked to swim. It would be even harder convincing his brother and sister to go with him, because whenever it rained, they got angry and fussed over their wet fur. How was he going to get them to come with them on a whole Sea? "Is he afraid of water, then?" he asked Nix.
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Post by Nix on Jul 11, 2011 17:53:42 GMT
Nix turned her head and looked at jex ,"yea, where he was a cub his older twin and me went swimming in a river and he came along but he came in at the wrong end and nearly drowned, I had to pull him out but he's never liked large bodies of water since" she said with a small smile ,"brother, you have to come or the others like me will kill you" she said in a rushed voice and ghost took a step towards her with his tail low as a shout came from the trees behind the hut and nix curled her hands into fists and then reached out and grabbed her brother by his scruff and tugged him on to the boat
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Post by chidori on Jul 12, 2011 15:55:12 GMT
Jex clambered into the boat with Jark, and snatched up an oar. He hoped Ghost would calm down. Maybe he should try what his father did with the clan dogs. "You probably won't like this idea," he began, "but maybe I could blindfold him. It calms them down and he can't see the water."
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Post by chidori on Jul 12, 2011 16:00:23 GMT
Sorry, forgot, plot:
Jex and Nix meet one another in the Forest after he is being chased. They become friends and travel to the Sea together, where they discover some fellow tribal people. After Jex fought with one boy, they go to find Jera, who tells them to protect Jark (he's her grandson, right?) and take him with them as they travel across the Sea. Overseas Jex and Nix decide to create a tribe between them. A storm strikes and they wake up on a beach, only to be found by their own twins (without knowing). They take their unknowing parents to their tribe. (I can't remember the rest, we didn't write up the plot we came up with)
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Post by Nix on Jul 12, 2011 17:16:55 GMT
Nix shook her head ,"he'll bite you if you try it and I can't do it to him myself, he would never trust me again and he's my brother ,I couldn't" she said in a small voice. Ghost gave a loud whine and then dipped his head under her arm and gave a loud whine and nix dropped her head and then rubbed her forehead against her brothers. He lifted his head up and licked her cheek and nix nodded and then sat up and used her oar to push the boat away from the beach and she felt the waves licked up against the edge of the boat as nix began to paddle
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Post by chidori on Jul 13, 2011 15:56:25 GMT
Jex nodded, feeling bad for even mentioning it. He began to use the oar to keep up his side of the boat, keeping his eyes on the wooden paddle slicing through the water. Something nudged him in the back of the neck and tugged at his hair. Sorrel crawled out onto his shoulder and began to nuzzle his ear. "Why did you wake me up early?" she mewed.
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Post by Nix on Jul 13, 2011 16:13:08 GMT
Nix dipped her paddle in to the water over and over and found herself wishing that she grown up like her freind from the sea islands ,he had always been good at boating wether it was in a river or in a lake or out at sea he was always good at boating. She looked around and then a cool wind blew over her sholders and she shivered and then looked up and groaned ,above her were dark black clouds that were blowing closer and closer to being right over the top of the boat
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Post by chidori on Jul 14, 2011 16:23:26 GMT
Jex didn't even want to look up when he felt a gust of wind blow past him. He just paddled, knowing what was coming. "To warn your brother," he replied to her, which was a half-lie. "Go do it." He forced himself to look up. The clouds were growing ever darker, some the same colours as the bruises he'd sustained from that fight. He lowered his eyebrows in displeasure.
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Post by Nix on Jul 14, 2011 16:45:06 GMT
Nix Felt a second wind blow over her sholders and she shivered before looking up again, the sky was truly growing black and she could feel the hair on her neck standing up which meant rain. She looked back to the boat as the first roll of thunder sounded out about them she shuddered and then looked up and a drip of rain fell into her eye and she muttered darkly and then whipped her eye and looked at jex ,"we need to hurry up or we'll be stuck out here a the waves grow and we'll all be I trouble" she said with a slight wobble slipping in to her voice as she spoke
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Post by chidori on Jul 15, 2011 7:15:36 GMT
Jex didn't know what she meant at first, but then he saw the rain falling. It pattered onto his arms, running down his face. He didn't have time to grab his parka, so he just pulled up his hood. Shadow and Sorrel curled up at either side of his neck, glad to have shelter from the rain. "Head that way," Jex replied, pointing to a section of cloud that was slightly less intimidating. It didn't look heavy with rain and was even letting some precious sunshine pour through.
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Post by Nix on Jul 15, 2011 10:53:25 GMT
Nix nodded as jex spoke and pushed her paddle in to the water but as soon as she did a wave crashed up against the side of the boat and the paddle was jerked of of her grip and she tipped over the side of the boat. water rushed up in to her face and she coughed and spluttered and then felt a grip on her back and she was pulled back in to the boat again ,she turned round to see ghost with a little ripped jerkin in his mouth, she smiled and him and rubbed his ears in thanks as another wave hit the boat and tipped it sideways and nix grabbed on to it's edges in fear ,"if this keeps up we'll all go in" she said in a high and wobbling voice ,it was a little know fact that nix hated sea water
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Post by chidori on Jul 15, 2011 15:29:39 GMT
Jex couldn't pull Nix back in as the same wave hit him directly in the face. His brother and sister hissed and ducked inside. He decided to take his hood off and tuck it beside his leg, in the dry. When he'd cleared the seawater from his eyes, Nix had been pulled back in, presumably by Ghost. The next wave sent the boat's side rearing up at his end, catching him on the rib. "We can get over there," he panted, a hand to his chest. "Just keep paddling."
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Post by Nix on Jul 15, 2011 15:40:48 GMT
Nix tilted her head over towards jex, "paddle with what? My oar was swept away in that last wave" she said in an angry voice but the winds whipped her words away from her mouth as soon as she spike them and another wave crashed in to the boat. Jark sat up in a sudden and looked over te edge of the boat but ghost bark of warning brought him sitting up right in a rush. She looked at jex and nix reached out and grabbed the other boys jerkin and then grabbed on to her rothsr and held both of them tightly ,"do not let go, ever, no matter what happens" she said to both of them
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