Jex - Human

[chidori]

OK... correct me if I'm doing anything wrong here, but here is Jex, my first CoAD charrie:

Name: Jex
Age: 14
Clan: Outcast (was Otter)
Appearance: He has thick dark-brown hair that is quite messy. His spiky fringe covers his outcast tattoo and his eyes are a deep sea blue with cerulean flecks near the pupil. Due to living in open spaces where he's exposed to the sun, he is quite tanned. Under his eyes and across his nose are light freckles. Overall, he has a fairly handsome face but is quite thin. He wears either a short-sleeved buckskin jerkin or a sleeveless wovenbark jerkin, buckskin shorts and neat elkhide boots that he can run in easily. During the winter he will wear a warm deerhide parka he made himself and a pair of full-length leggings. He has a rough scar running up his whole right arm.
Family: None (parents killed by hunters)
Companions: Pine marten twins Shadow and Sorrel
Personality: Years of being outcast have made him untrustworthy to others and he hasn't been around humans since he was eight. He is also quick to flee from others and sometimes doesn't talk much. He can be rude and belittling at first, making people give him their weapons to prove they won't kill him. Eventually he warms up to them and is a good listener, honest and thoughtful. He goes to high extremes to protect others, especially Shadow and Sorrel.

[Nix]

You need to have a look at our charatce application, you missed out some important things

[chidori]

Sorry, ignore that first post:

Name - Jex

Gender - Male

Age - 14

Species - Human

Family - Parents (both dead)

Clan/Tribe - Was Otter Clan (outcast)

Appearance - He has thick dark-brown hair that is quite messy. His spiky fringe covers his outcast tattoo and his eyes are a deep sea blue with cerulean flecks near the pupil. Due to living in open spaces where he's exposed to the sun, he is quite tanned. Under his eyes and across his nose are light freckles. Overall, he has a fairly handsome face but is quite thin. He wears either a short-sleeved buckskin jerkin or a sleeveless wovenbark jerkin, buckskin shorts and neat elkhide boots that he can run in easily. During the winter he will wear a warm deerhide parka he made himself and a pair of full-length leggings. He has a rough scar running up his whole right arm.

Personality - Years of being outcast have made him untrustworthy to others and he hasn't been around humans since he was eight. He is also quick to flee from others and sometimes doesn't talk much. He can be rude and belittling at first, making people give him their weapons to prove they won't kill him. Eventually he warms up to them and is a good listener, honest and thoughtful. He goes to high extremes to protect others, especially Shadow and Sorrel.

Weapons - Three small throwing blades and a tiny knife he made himself.

Other equipment - Pack he made himself, belt, fingerless gloves he made himself.

Animal companion - Shadow and Sorrel - pine marten twins. Sorrel is the oldest by a few minutes and a rich brown colour all over with a yellow underside. She's the calmer of the two. Shadow is the youngest and a dark brown colour with a honey underside. He can be a little tense sometimes, but is usually his playful pine marten self.

History - Ever since he was born, his mother has been frowned upon as she and Jex's father were not proper mates together. When Jex was eight his mother was pregnant with his sister-to-be, but their clan had enough and tried to outcast her. His father refused to leave her, and cut his and Jex's arm, clasping them together. As a result of ignoring orders, the clan banished them all. Since that day Jex's parents have been on the run, teaching their son all he would have learnt if he were in a clan. Moons later, just before Jex's mother could give birth to his sister, hunters arrived. Jex ran, thinking his parents were following. His father refused to leave his distressed wife, and they were both shot. Jex now lives alone with his two pine marten siblings.

RP sample ---> Jex tore from the tough reed bed with Shadow and Sorrel following swiftly in pursuit. An arrow whizzed past shortly followed by a spear and both disappeared somewhere in the bullrushes. The young Boar hunters had been seeking him out for almost a moon now but they hadn't shot him yet.
Spotting a small but steep ridge bordering the Forest, he quickly threw himself over it and took refuge inside a hollow log. Arrows rained over him and he watched the hunters run further into the forest, away from him. He sighed in relief.

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That's much better, I'll move and approve him now and you can post up the 1-1 plot and we can pick up where we left off, this is the charrie Ill be playing instead of pixa - changlings.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=agirls&action=display&thread=63