Re: Hotaru (DONE)

[Akiko]

Name - Hotaru

Gender - Female

Age - 15 summers

Species - Hanyou

Which parent was half human? (Father is Natura Filli)

Animal body type - Fox

Family Mother and father abandoned her, then she was found by a vixen, this is who she says is her mother.


Clan/Tribe AitrTribe

AppearanceShe has red hair and golden eyes. she is quite tall and very dainty. She is very beautiful. her good looks were apparently derived from her mother. She has ears. She has no freckles but has a scar on her arm from a fight when she lived with the vixen.

Personality She is very happy and friendly. She is very helpful but really secretive and won't trust people until they prove that they can be trusted. Once proven, she will be open, honest and loyal, because of her past and the way in which she was brought up.

Weapons none

Other equipmentsleep sack, winter clothes, repair kit and a bag made by the ravens for her.

History She was abandoned and left to die till her 'mother' found her. she was then taken when she was 6 summers to live with the air tribe. she was found by the leader who took her to kill her but the mage refused to let him with the rest of the clan backing the mage up. Till then she stayed with them. She took to hunting from an early age and is looked up to by the youngest hunters, even the boys. Even the leader came to realize she was a good addition to the tribe. Hardworking, good huntress and partly a mage. She contributes loads to the tribe and is determined to go collect kinds the same as her just as she was but she can't do that yet.

RP sample Hotaru smiled. the young children gathered around. She promised to show them a knew game she made for 3 players *because that was the only kids in the clan* they listened so attentively. She wandered into the woods while they played. She heard a sound. She followed it....

Do you have any other accounts?Kenzo, Tehanu, Akiko
Who is your characters face claim/play by Rachel Jackson
Anything elsenope

[Nix]

A bit more on the personality and appearance please, it's too vague at the moment

[goldygirl200]

Not sure how Nix approves it all, but I did notice that in her appearance, the end stopped at "she has ears", but there is no period there. Was there more or is that the last bit of it?

In my opinion, it's still a little vauge, but Nix knows the most. And there are a few spelling errors. There's a spell check below that can can fix all that in a jiffy.^^ Don't forget to split up sentances with periods and/or commas so they're not run-ons.

Other than that, I think it's good and I like her. Nix'll probably reply next.

[Nix]

id like a little more on the history if you could and also, she'll need a clan/tribe

want help there?

[Akiko]

ok after along time i've modified it

[Nix]

She would be in a tribe my friend, forest tribe most Likely as it's closest to the clan listed but humans would have killed her had she been in a clan

Aside that, she just needs expanding on her history and RP sample a little bit

[Akiko]

edited

[Nix]

I've had a small poke from my changelings nerd sister to ask you, if you wanted you could make her the only forest hanyou in the air tribe and see if people will plot with her then

Just a suggestion from wolfpixie I'll approve her once I know you've seen this

[Akiko]

Thanks you guys I wouldn't have thought of that

EDITED!!!!

[goldygirl200]

I would say that it's perfect! I like. ;D All is left for Nix to approve it.^^

[Nix]

shes good to go! just comment as her new account here and ill move and approve this

[Hotaru]

YOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Nix]

ill set it all up now